Hello (and sorry for advertising) Seeing as you're a writer, I thought you might be interested in my group Try-Your-Page and it's where you post the first page (or any excerpt) of a story/novel and see if others would turn the page. Please join if you're looking for critique or just something to read. The rules are that you have to comment on others' works in order to submit, so there's a high chance you DO get feedback
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